Does this poem express regret? I am gonna use this to get back with a girl?
I’m planning on using this to get back together with a girl
Its kind of hard not to go insane,
When your life crashes down like a plane,
All your memories destroyed in vain,
A joint future thrown away what a shame,
When your truly the one to blame.
No, it kinda sounds like your saying everything was her fault.
Dude, yeah allot of girls fall for poems and stuff, but it is better to show her that you miss her than by just saying it, or witting it down on paper.
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No, it kinda sounds like your saying everything was her fault.
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nope dude, it sounds like you are blaming her 4 what ever happened. instead of using "your", make it personal and use "my" or "our".i am a poet, i can help you if you want but most importantly, show her not tell her that you are sorry. actions speak louder than voice
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